Mr Satan or The God Athletism?

The team put correctly the names and surnames, the group they belong to, they chose a name for the magazine and wrote three sentences.
Your grade for the first session is: (9).

You need to choose one of the magazine names  in order to achieve the whole points. 

Careful!! 

- Your mistakes were:
we propose to name (not named) the athletism magazine:
Lola loves football, she is the best receiver
I score a lot of goals
I propose "The God Athletism as a name for the magazine 

Find the mistakes  in the following texts:

Shelly-Ann Fraser (10 mistakes)

Shelly-Ann Fraser O.D were born in December 27th, 1986. He is a sprinter who represented Jamaica at the 2008 Summer Olympics. She are from Kingston, Jamaica. Shelly-Ann run as a professional athlete everyday but when she began running, she did it barefoot, during primary school. She is being the first Jamaican woman in history to win an Olympic gold medal in the 100 metres sprint. She cans run 100 metres in 10’78 seconds. His legs are very long and his skin is dark. She’s father are from Jamaica and she’s mother too.

 

Usain Bolt (10 mistakes)

Usain Bolt C.D are a Jamaican sprinter. Usain hold the Olympic and world records for the 100 metres at 9.69 seconds, the 200 metres at 19.30 seconds and with her teammates, the 4x100 metres at 37.10 seconds. She set the records at the 2008 Summer Olympics. Bolt became the first woman to win all three events at a single Olympics since Carl Lewis in 1984. Her achievements in sprinting have earned him the name "'Lightning' Bolt". He eat a lot of food everyday because he are burning all the calories running. Usain Bolt Jamaican, like her colleague Shelly-Ann.

Write a short text after reading some information about your two sportsmen and post it. Use the following links:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Usain_Bolt
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shelly-Ann_Fraser

 

 

  

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4 comentarios

[Nèstor & Andreu - 04 de diciembre de 2008 - 09:44]

Shelly-Ann Fraser O.D that born in December 27th, 1986. She is a sprinter that represent Jamaica at the 2008 Summer Olympics. She are from Kingston, in Jamaica. Shelly-Ann run as a professional athlete every day but when she began running, she did it barefoot, during primary school. She is being the first Jamaican woman in history to win an Olympic gold medal in the 100 metres sprint. She can run 100 metres in 10’78 seconds. Her legs are very long and her skin is dark. He’s father is from Jamaica and she’s mother too.

[aina giulia maria - 04 de diciembre de 2008 - 09:33]

Usain Bolt (10 mistakes)

Usain Bolt C.D is a Jamaican sprinter. Usain holds the Olympic and world records for the 100 metres at 9.69 seconds, the 200 metres at 19.30 seconds and with his teammates, the 4x100 metres at 37.10 seconds. He set the records at the 2008 Summer Olympics. Bolt became the first man to win all three events at a single Olympics since Carl Lewis in 1984. His achievements in sprinting have earned him the name "'Lightning' Bolt". He eats a lot of food everyday because he is burning all the calories running. Usain Bolt is Jamaican, like his colleague Shelly-Ann.

we find the 10 mistakes

[nèstor - 04 de diciembre de 2008 - 09:28]

The silver medals from the 2007 Osaka World Championships boosted Bolt's desire to run, and he took a more serious, more mature stance towards his career.[8] Bolt continued to develop in the 100 m, and he entered to run in the event at the Jamaica Invitational in Kingston. On 3 May 2008, Bolt ran a time of 9.76 s, aided by a tail wind of 1.8 m/s, considerably improving upon his previous personal best of 10.03 s.[41] This was the second-fastest legal performance in the history of the event; second only to compatriot Asafa Powell's 9.74 s record set the previous year in Rieti, Italy.[42] Rival Tyson Gay lauded the performance, praising Bolt's form and technique especially.[43] Michael Johnson, who was observing the race, said that he was shocked at how quickly he had improved over the 100 m distance.[44] The Jamaican surprised even himself with the time, but coach Glen Mills remained confident that there was more to come.[43]

[Nèstor & Andreu - 04 de diciembre de 2008 - 09:25]

Shelly-Ann Fraser (10 mistakes)

Shelly-Ann Fraser O.D where born in December 27th, 1986. She is a sprinter that represent Jamaica at the 2008 Summer Olympics. She are from Kingston, Jamaica. Shelly-Ann run as a professional athlete every day but when she begin running, she did it barefoot, during primary school. She is being the first Jamaican woman in history to win an Olympic gold medal in the 100 metres sprint. She can run 100 metres in 10’78 seconds. Her legs are very long and her skin is dark. She’s father is from Jamaica and she’s mother too.